Okay working on this literature review, the topic is icloud. I have uploaded a dissertation which we are wanting to use as a reference. The organization we are using is a called imit Art, which is an Art organization. I have uploaded the initial paper we used from the a past class, it is an example of chapter 1 and am aware we will need to revise. If you need more time let me know and I will extend it.

I have submitted the paper in the past however the professor will not accept. I am giving you his feedback here.

Please get in touch with your personal email. Let’s find a time to talk. –Dr. E.

REVISED 11/19/19 – This paper provides a bit of background information, i.e. Cloud computing and data security. It also has a section Theory with some brief discussion – what is the source you are using to provide this theory/information? Design Components seems to identify some elements of data collection. But overall this is still very short of a good Ch. 1, Introduction. Follow the outline of content I provided below from the DBA Handbook. Also, you have not included any comments regarding how to use this Introduction to help you do research for Ch. 2. I am concerned about your progress and understanding regarding what is required. Let me know if you would like to talk. So I have modified the score on this assignment. You can move ahead or you can redo this again. A good SLP1 will help you as you do the SLPs.–Dr. E.

REVISED PAPER: Note: I am not concerned about your Similarity Scores in the SLP assignments.

This paper, Nov. 3, seems to be almost the same as the one you submitted on Oct. 25. Do you have a Ch. 1 that you created in your DOC650 class or that you previously developed? If not, then write one, and use it for this assignment. Let me know if you have any questions. –Dr. E.

ORIGINAL PAPER:You have not followed the assignment. Would you like to try again? Revise and resubmit and I will review and revise the score.

Here is the assignment:

During Module 1, you are expected to take the introduction to your project that you developed in your previous course, and annotate it to identify key areas in which literature will need to be searched and the other kinds of background information that you will need to develop in order to support your project.

Specifically, you are to:

Review your draft introduction that you developed previously. Using a copy of this introduction, develop an annotation for each paragraph in your introduction in which you identify various kinds of source material that might back up and justify the points made in the paragraph. Try to be as complete as you can. At this point, you do not need to describe specific sources; just the general kind of material you would like to search out in order to support your arguments.