Final Examination Part I (Photography) Grade Sheet for _______________________________________________________________

Point Value 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 Subtotal

The Three Photographs Come from the Approved Photo Gallery Two-point deduction for each unfulfilled requirement. 0

The Introduction States That the Essay Will Discuss Photographs Yes It Does No It Does Not (0)

5

The Introduction Includes Three Keywords Capturing the Content of the Photographs, and not the numbers #1, #2, and #3 All Keywords Capture the Content of the Photographs 2 Keywords Capture the Content of the Photographs 1 Keyword Captures the Content of the Photographs No Keywords Capture the Content of the Photographs (0) 4

Quality of the Introduction Excellent Very Good Average Below Average Poor 5

Presence of Topic Sentences All body paragraphs contain topic sentences which are not too wordy. 3 body paragraphs have a faulty topic sentence or none at all. 2 body paragraphs have a topic sentence. 1 body paragraph has a topic sentence or none at all.

No “body” paragraphs have a topic sentence. (0) 5

Quality of the Topic Sentences 2 smooth transitions exist in between the 2nd to 4h body paragraphs. 1 smooth transition exists in between the 2nd to 4th body paragraphs. No smooth transitions exist in between the 2nd to 4th body paragraphs. 3

Each Body Paragraph Mentions That You Are Discussing a Photograph All body paragraphs mention that you are discussing a photograph. 2 body paragraphs mention that you are discussing a photograph. 1 body paragraph mentions that you are discussing a photograph. No “body” paragraphs mention that you are discussing a photograph. 4

Each Body Paragraph Devotes at Least Two Consecutive Sentences To a Description of the Designated Photograph All body paragraphs devote at least two consecutive sentences to a description of the designated photograph 2 body paragraphs devote at least two consecutive sentences to a description of the designated

photograph 1 body paragraph devotes at least two consecutive sentences to a description of the designated

Photograph. No “body” paragraphs devote at least two consecutive sentences to a description of the designated photograph. 4

Each Body Paragraph Explains Two Reasons Why the Photograph Interests the Writer 6 reasons were presented. 5 reasons were presented. 4 reasons were presented. 3 reasons were presented. 2 reasons were presented. 1 reasons was presented. No reasons are presented. 7

Internal Sentence Organization No Errors 1 error detected 2 or more errors detected 5

The Conclusion Begins with a Thesis Statement of Three Keywords Yes It Does. No It Does Not. (0) 3

=SUM(ABOVE) 45

Point Value 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 Subtotal

Level Three Grammatical Errors One error 2 errors 3 errors 4 errors 5 errors 6 errors 7 errors 8 errors 9 errors 10 or more errors 10

Level Two Grammatical Errors 1 error 2 errors 3 errors 4 errors 5 or more errors 5

Level One Grammatical Errors 4 errors 8 errors 12 errors 16 errors 20 or more errors 5

Bonus Points 2 points offset Level 1 errors.3 points offset Level 2 errors.4 points offset Level 3 errors.Leftover points appear in the box to the right. 0

The Conclusion Begins with a Thesis Statement of Three Keywords Reflecting the Content of the Photographs, and not #1, #2, and #3 Yes It Does. No It Does Not. (0) 3

The Conclusion Contains Three Summary Sentences of Each Body Paragraph 3 sentences present 2 sentences present 1 sentence present No sentences present (0) 7

Overall Quality of the Conclusion Excellent Very Good Average Below Average Poor 5

Presence of a Works Cited Page If Needed 2-point deduction for each missing citation both within the text and on the citation page. 0

Accuracy of MLA Citation Format Bonus sources are cited accurately. All sources are cited accurately. All sources are cited with partial accuracy. 2 sources are cited with partial accuracy.

1 source is cited accurately. 1 source is cited with partial accuracy.No source is cited accurately (0). 0

Format Errors No errors 1 error 2 errors 3 errors 4 or more errors (0) 5

Forgot Sentence Numbers or Single Spaced Ten-point deduction 0

Sentence Shortages/Overages Two-point deduction per error 0

Current Subtotal =10+5+5+3+7+5+5 40

Previous Subtotal 45

Total ( 85 Points Maximum) 85

Lateness Penalties Essay received by the original due date (Full credit of 85/85) Essay received by the last possible due (Limit of 77/85) Essay received after the last possible due date (ZERO)

0

Total Converted to 150 Points 150