#1CRITERION:

Evaluate the importance of attribution style (LOC) and extrinsic and intrinsic motivation in specialized field of psychology.

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Explains attribution style and extrinsic and intrinsic motivation, but does not evaluate the importance of these concepts in a specialized field of psychology. Attribution style and locus of control was discussed but could be applied. What field of psychology could you use to apply these concepts? You seemed to imply that it was counseling; however, this needed much more explanation and detail.

#2CRITERION:

Apply evidence-based research in learning theories to guide decision making and problem solving. Explain connection between attribution style (LOC) and extrinsic and intrinsic motivation with evidence-based research.

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Explains attribution style (LOC) and extrinsic and intrinsic motivation, but does not explain connection, or explains connection but does not use evidence-based research. Your comments were informative; however, you discussed much of the theory without listing any sources. You must add evidence- based sources.

#3CRITERION:

Write clearly and logically, with correct use of spelling, grammar, punctuation, and mechanics; format paper, citations, and references using APA style.

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Does not write clearly and logically, with correct use of spelling, grammar, punctuation, and mechanics; does not format citations correctly using APA style. The abstract is not a paragraph and should not be indented like one. Many of your citations were missing. You should never discuss a theory or theorist (such as Weiner) without adding a source for that information. The citation must be added when the material is first mentioned and not later in a paragraph.

Your second reference was not written in APA style. Please use more than two sources.